beitrag von: Sylvia
The Phoenix or flying on your wishbone
The use-by date now long passed
That's why Phoenix meat's made to last
So old, after all
Twas on sale in the Mall
Strip the meat from the bones faster than fast
Then you fly on its wishbone, fly high or bust!
review von: clemens j. setz
Inspiring! I just thought of an alternative last line - not meant as a correction of the original, just as a version inspired by your lines:
The use-by date now long passed
That's why Phoenix meat's made to last
So old, after all
Twas on sale in the Mall
on the outskirts of Irkutsk Oblast
(Don't know why that came into my mind.)
